Dear,
as the sun rises in the east
and ends in the west
I'll prove to you my worthiness
I'll give you my very best
Is it love what makes me this way?
Is it love what makes me want you stay?
Your eyes shine my journey
The melodies of your voice
Guides me to the light
You show me no misery
You gave me a choice
A world of black, or white?
Dear,
I have scarred your heart
I forced tears out of your eyes
still, you're there for me
My soul was once torn apart
I was bound to fall from the skies
There were you, infront of me
Holding my hand
with a grasp of care
I was blind,
You were always there.....
Dear,
despite our fallen love
my attitudes of disgrace
and your fake smile
despite you were once a dove
above all human race
with a nest at The Isle
of Joy and Laughter,
now you are once again free
so, I ask from you,
will you forgive me?
1 comment:
Hi, hope you don't mind me intruding, I sort of noticed from web traffic, that you are following puisipoesy, and wanted to say a big 'thank you', though I must confess, we unfortunately don't feature Malay puisi, as much as we wanted to. In fact, we had someone who offered to do it, but unfortunately, she's too busy and dropped out. And even now, most of our members have stopped posting, and we are wondering whether to reinvent our blog by inviting some people we know, or to stop it. Also, wanted to in a sense, 'excuse' our blog, for some of the contents, that might appear, to put in mildly, a bit 'strong'. I'm kinda expressing this out of full respect for you, though we still hold on to a kind of 'poetic license'.
Anyway, I sort of took a look at your other blog, and admire your goals to improve the English standards among the young, so should applaud you on your work. So, just in case you might not know, wanted to share a few blog links and personalities that might be of interest to you.
Firstly, Sharon Bakar, whose blog is the one stop for all Malaysian literary lovers. She was a teacher at MCCK, but now mainly a teacher of creative writing and an organiser of literry events around kl. Her blog is
http://thebookaholic.blogspot.com/
Next up is Enar, a lawyer by profession. She writes nice little bits of her own poetic caveats. I haven't met her in person, but from what I heard, a really nice person.
http://justenar.blogspot.com/
Lastly, this may or may not interest you, but some Malaysians do write creative stuff on their own, and they send some of them to Malaysna Poetic Chronicles, run by my friend who also runs puisipoesy. He'll have a look before deciding to put it up. Some really nice pieces of Malaysian writing there.
http://themalaysianpoeticchronicles.blogspot.com/
Lastly, my apologies for being busybody and writing this overly long comment... it's a bit of my habit, hope you don' take offence, but hope some of the links I share are useful to you. Thanks again.
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